Composition(20pts): 17 some degree of foreground, middle, background.
Contrast (20pts): 18 I can see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 15 We don't really know where to look yet although it does draw us in.
Craftsmanship (20pts):15 I think it is a good shape for the bear and it definitely makes us want to ask questions about what is happening. I am not sure I see the answer. Is the yellow supposed to be fire? We may need to see where this one fits and if there is anything we can add to make the message stronger. I also think the bottom floor of the buildings is possible (if we saw it from the side we wouldn't see a door) but if it is from the front we would need a door. It has a stark, unfinished feeling but maybe that is what you are going for.
Creativity (10pts): 7 Great addition of background elements.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent! on time! 83
Composition(20pts): 17 some degree of foreground, middle, background.
ReplyDeleteContrast (20pts): 18 I can see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 15 We don't really know where to look yet although it does draw us in.
Craftsmanship (20pts):15 I think it is a good shape for the bear and it definitely makes us want to ask questions about what is happening. I am not sure I see the answer. Is the yellow supposed to be fire? We may need to see where this one fits and if there is anything we can add to make the message stronger.
I also think the bottom floor of the buildings is possible (if we saw it from the side we wouldn't see a door) but if it is from the front we would need a door. It has a stark, unfinished feeling but maybe that is what you are going for.
Creativity (10pts): 7 Great addition of background elements.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent! on time!
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