Composition(20pts): 15 Good balance of the foreground, middle, background. The area around it could be more broken up by under sea life, it seems pretty plain.
Contrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 15 I like the idea of the turtle and the hand and silhouette. I think the had is good but maybe the oil could look more like liquid. (add drops?) I wish it had more of a finished feel
Creativity (10pts): 7 Great addition of background elements.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent! on time!
Think about narrowing the focus from now on to say one definite thing visually. Decide whether this is a story or not. Is it like an editorial piece and stating a fact or a cautionary tale warning us of the future?
Composition(20pts): 15 Good balance of the foreground, middle, background. The area around it could be more broken up by under sea life, it seems pretty plain.
ReplyDeleteContrast (20pts): 20 Good! I can squint and see really dark darks and lights.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 15 I like the idea of the turtle and the hand and silhouette. I think the had is good but maybe the oil could look more like liquid. (add drops?)
I wish it had more of a finished feel
Creativity (10pts): 7 Great addition of background elements.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent! on time!
Think about narrowing the focus from now on to say one definite thing visually. Decide whether this is a story or not. Is it like an editorial piece and stating a fact or a cautionary tale warning us of the future?