Composition(20pts): 18 Hints at a foreground, middle, background I think color in the middle ground would help (maybe it seeps into the bottom windows? see your dropbox
Contrast (20pts): 16
Center of Interest(20 pts): 19 Keeping the subject out of the will score better.
Craftsmanship (20pts): 13 I like the nuances of value in the details of the heart but it seems unfinished.
Creativity (10pts): 5 The direction you are going: "Nature being destroyed by man" "natural disasters" and "hope" in your concentration worksheet seem to be in conflict.
Your concentration statement has to be more like I am using __________ to explore ____________ by using watercolor and oil paint.
It can be a juxtaposition (forcing two opposite things together) but I think you need an ending.
Remember you said you were using "figure ground relationship" which is playing with what is in the foreground and the background. https://tinyurl.com/kfp6qa9
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 5 Excellent! ON TIME :) YAY! But unfinished
Composition(20pts): 18 Hints at a foreground, middle, background
ReplyDeleteI think color in the middle ground would help (maybe it seeps into the bottom windows? see your dropbox
Contrast (20pts): 16
Center of Interest(20 pts): 19 Keeping the subject out of the will score better.
Craftsmanship (20pts): 13 I like the nuances of value in the details of the heart but it seems unfinished.
Creativity (10pts): 5 The direction you are going: "Nature being destroyed by man" "natural disasters" and "hope" in your concentration worksheet seem to be in conflict.
Your concentration statement has to be more like I am using __________ to explore ____________ by using
watercolor and oil paint.
It can be a juxtaposition (forcing two opposite things together)
but I think you need an ending.
Remember you said you were using "figure ground relationship"
which is playing with what is in the foreground and the background. https://tinyurl.com/kfp6qa9
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 5 Excellent! ON TIME :) YAY! But unfinished
78 Finish and resubmit for a higher grade