very nice, I think the colors in person are much better than here. Really nice colors behind the buildings and good placement of the trees- design and spacing to add rhythm. I think the shadows would look much better dark though. As is it is an 85 (late - 10) Change the shadows and it will go higher.
Keep going! your idea is excellent and you are very consistent in the look and feel of the pieces. Its OK if they all stay with this meaning or if you turn it optimistic. Either way, it feels like a story illustration, super job, keep going! Almost there!
very nice, I think the colors in person are much better than here.
ReplyDeleteReally nice colors behind the buildings and good placement of the trees- design and spacing to add rhythm.
I think the shadows would look much better dark though.
As is it is an 85 (late - 10) Change the shadows and it will go higher.
Keep going! your idea is excellent and you are very consistent in the look and feel of the pieces. Its OK if they all stay with this meaning or if you turn it optimistic. Either way, it feels like a story illustration, super job, keep going! Almost there!
ReplyDeleteRepost with changes. I have increased your grade.
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